In the lesson my partner and I had presented our unfinished film opening.
The main problems that our peers have pointed out to us is that we had a couple people cut out of the shot so it wasn't filmed well and i am highly aware that we may be marked down due to this.
The lighting wasn't very good, as it got quite dark very quickly. So in some shots what you could see on the screen wasn't very clear. The location that we had chosen wasn't the best as the camera had picked up all the traffic and wind noises instead of the actors. Me and my partner both have has ideas to fix this problem so this was the least of our worries.
We both didn't just receive negative comments, we did get some positive feedback. They did mention that everything flowed effectively and we had good ideas, all or credits were good and that we had a really good production company. We had some constructive criticism by the class as well, they advised use to shorten some scenes to change the boldness of the font
Overall I believe the two of us have a clear understanding to what we have to do to make our film as good as possible.
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